Do you like it? I\'m not sure that the ninja\'s face is good.. I\' ll submit an other version soon.

An other version, with a different face.. Which one do you prefer?

Just one or two critiques, please?

This looks really nice! This second version looks much better from the first. For now I only suggest working on the perspective of the ninjas hand?



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Ok, thanks for your critique, i'll work on the hand .

I like this one better. I'd wear this shirt. I like it.



check mine out.

http://threadless.com/critique/16487/Pocket_Protector

second one looks great. i do think the hand looks a bit small.

well I personally think that some of the disproportionate stuff is fitting with the art style. I like it, but that's just me.

Maybe give the monster a hand coming over his shoulder

(where he's looking at).



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