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v1 Hungry monster, 639 days ago, click to expand
v2 Hungry monster, current version








Work in progress by:
keuj
on Mar 08 '08
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Version 1 - 639 days ago
Version 2 - 638 days ago

keuj
keuj on Mar 08 '08
An other version, with a different face.. Which one do you prefer?
keuj
keuj on Mar 09 '08
Just one or two critiques, please?
empiricist
   empiricist on Mar 09 '08
This looks really nice! This second version looks much better from the first. For now I only suggest working on the perspective of the ninjas hand?

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keuj
keuj on Mar 09 '08
Ok, thanks for your critique, i'll work on the hand .
Diggit_6
Diggit_6 on Mar 09 '08
I like this one better. I'd wear this shirt. I like it.

check mine out.
http://threadless.com/critique/16487/Pocket_Protector
LittleMan
LittleMan on Mar 09 '08
second one looks great. i do think the hand looks a bit small.
Diggit_6
Diggit_6 on Mar 09 '08
well I personally think that some of the disproportionate stuff is fitting with the art style. I like it, but that's just me.
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NJz Kollectionz
NJz Kollectionz on May 10 '08
Maybe give the monster a hand coming over his shoulder
(where he's looking at).

http://www.threadless.com/profile/727302/NJz_Kollectionz/critiques
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