not sure whether i\'ll sub this yet. what do you think?

The image of the bonfire is awesome. I don't think you need the speech-balloon; it's obvious the marsh is being burned at the stake for being (or doing) something bad. And it seems like there should maybe be more of a mob watching.

I'd buy it!

just thinking of how they used to burn people at the stake maybe everyone (besides the one being burned) looking like they are enjoying it instead of so bored/sad.

just thinking of how they used to burn people at the stake maybe everyone (besides the one being burned) looking like they are enjoying it instead of so bored/sad.

This is great! I'd buy for sure. As said previously, do get rid of the text balloon because it's unnecessary.

I don't think they should look happy, just slant the eyebrows on the one with the pitchfork so it looks more angry rather than bored. And lose the bubble.

i like the tshirt as well as the word box but I agree on making the one holding the pitch fork a lil angrier.

i love it... love the concept

I agree with removing the bubble. It leaves the viewer to wonder what kind of crime a pink marshmallow would be guilty of in a white-marshmallow society :D

i'd rather see matches than sticks...

I think the sticks give it a cool mix between realism and cartoonish-ness... If it was matches and marshmallows it would be too cutsy.

Haha, I love it. The joke, the drawing style, the layout...perfect! I wouldn't change a thing. :) Submit it!

i agree about the text balloon and would like to see the small marshmallow hiding half behind his mom.. i seems like there should be more marshmallows but it looks good on the shirt as is, otherwise it will get too busy. maybe add some rocks around the fire.. but liek i said looks good as is! any suggestions for my design?

I don't see anything on the marshmallow that signifies a witch besides the one marshmallow saying it. The only issue about the marshmallow on the stake is that it's pink, and that to me is more about a racism then being a witch?



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You should put a false carrot nose on her.

rooly cool!

yip I'd agree with lose the balloon. Sticks are great.

Would like to see without stroke around flame, and without hatch marks on pink witch :)

yess yess lose the text balloon otherwise...submit!!



i think it would be funnier if there was graham crackers and chocolate on the side...he he

That's well funny!

Perhaps extend there shadows more to be in keeping with the light source (the fire) thus creating more of an atmosphere.



Otherwise I think it's grand!!!! - Sub.

lose the text and submit!

id rock this shirt!

I think the pinkness of the marshmallow is because its getting burned, not because of racism. And they shouldnt look happy lol, they should look angry.



I like it as it is.

Cool beans, I like it.