I am fond of the concept, but not convinced of the execution. Something isn\'t right and I can\'t place my finger on it. All suggestions welcome.

So the alien is controlling the wolf, in sheep's clothing? It's not clear what the green thing is, and the smile is a little cliche.



Something less anthropomorphic?

Yeah, clearly my execution is flawed. It is supposed to be grass that is controlling the wolf in sheep's clothing. Its a revenge thing since sheep is currently eating grass.

hehe, the sheeps expression made me laugh

Would the grass read more as grass and less as an alien if it had no face? Hmm, it would also be a good idea to repeat the grass clump shape in the hill more, to help tie it all together.

I don't know if I agree with the whole grass as a wolf as a sheep idea. It seems like a 'what?' kind of moment, why is the grass taking revenge? Where the wolf in a sheeps clothing makes sense to me. There arent so many jumps.



If im making any sense lol

The way I pictured it in my head was that Wolf eats Sheep and Sheep Eats Grass, but what does the Grass do? The grass is defenseless! Or is it? What if it was the mastermind behind the wolf because the sheep was eating all the grass?

This is great i think it would still be funny without the alien. but thats just me. good job.