for the hot chip loves threadless contest.

i know, tuxedo t shirts exist already... but do they hide until the sun goes down? i feel like this would be a real fun shirt to wear out, in particular when going out to a club and what not.



design is all vector, when i was saving it to jpeg it got a little bit odd looking, or maybe just the small text not part of the t shirt design did.

i like it

hmm... one yes and one no... any comments as to why?

btw, i meant to add to the reasons of why this shirt has the potential to be awesme if made... its like two shirts in one...

the tux looks good. the text could use a different font. and maybe even no text. but if so, definitely a different font.

p.s. http://www.threadless.com/critique/15876/world_peas

Glow in the dark ink isn't invisible.

how visible is it?

is it like a dark grey on a black shirt or is it like a white or lighter grey? cause im trying to go for that incognito look, but if its super visible in the daylight from a distance well that sorta ruins my idea.



also, i know im gonna get a bunch of no text critiques... well, the text, i believe, adds to the shirt, rather than takes away. maybe a different font perhaps, but i believe as is it would work.

im thinking, if i am going to change the font, that im gonna change it to something simple such as ariel, and much smaller scrolling across, not down the shirt.

bump

tuxedo shirts have been around for really long, and i really dont think the glow in the dark really makes it more appealing

Get rid of the text. It's not necessary.

hmm i think the tuxedo looks good, but it kinda bothers me that it's another tux shirt, i don't think this is special just because of the glow in the dark thing, it's still a tux shirt... sorry!