I\'m a little stuck on this one, was thinking of replacing the grey shaded bits with hatching. Ideas/comments?

I think it would work better if you just had the girl, the kite and the fan. Add color!

yeah, and its looks a little naked.



placement?

the window scene should be moved over to the space between the girl and the kite

I think you should lose the window.

Agree, lose window and add color. And lets see it on a shirt...



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Needs more color, I agree. And maybe put some kind of expression on the girl's face...happy or bored. Something like that. Check out my stuff! Please! link text

Been really busy at work recently. so the polishing on this has been slow, but sort of steady.



Kah

Goddamn the anti-aliasing is shocking.

More blue? I'm definitely thinking more blue.

i like the yellow and red... maybe dont need the blue.

Would green be too literal?

2 months long, must be the slowest back burner ever.

its a nice concept but it just isn't a shirt or style i would wear



i'm soryy :/

best v so far



blades on fan?

This looks rockin'! I'd like the illustration a little further up, though. Also, not a fan of white as a shirt color.

Fan is going, so you can't see the blades as they spin.

Besides the color, what do you guys think of the idea and illustrations?



Any suggestions for color/placements?

great but something's lack in it:D i just can't figure it out

Any suggestions for color/placements? Critiques on the drawing/idea?