Inspired by a misread newspaper headline. Has since inspired a song.

hahahaha....awesome! Love the style and fashions festooned on these birdies! The one perched on the ground is a little oddly shaped, but other than that, this is good to go....might look better straight in the middle of the tee tho.

i like the bottom off center placement. yes, maybe make the front bird not as wide? not sure, it does look a bit off. maybe too much of the leg showing for a bird in that pose? i dunno. i do agree with FA, it's a go! nice stuff. i love the look of the one with the beret on!

Anyone have any opinons on t-shirt colors for this? I played about with navy but it didn't really look right. Isn't there a forest color t-shirt nowadays? It wasn't in the template file...

looking good but i have an issue with the legs, hey seem too smooth, maybe a little texture will fix that, also i think the feathers should come down almost to the knees, kinda seems they took their pants off XD, anyway good luck

The birds are a little flat - and you may want to think about switching the eyes out with some beady lifeless bird eyes. Good work!



Critiques on my design are appreciated!

Shirt color suggestions, anyone?

I agree with keithcw that the birds seem a bit flat.



I love the hats!

Gave my boys some feather sheen and some more reflection on their metallic bits. Also re-worked the color scheme to go with some different shirt colors; I'm thinking silver, forest or eggplant.



Also, drat: you can't change the aspect ratio of subsequent versions of a critique. If you try, it just squooshes it down. Ah well, live and learn.



Whaddaya think, sirs?

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Note to self: a bit more highlighting on the feathers of the hat, something better with light & shadow on the substance of the hats, fix the crown reflections, fix the center bird's claws.



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The center crow seems a little flat - maybe fix the perspective?

^ agree. It kinda looks like a lady bug right now. . .

I think ladybug needs more body behind the cape -- it will then quite possibly transform into a clad crow..

Still needs beady bird eyes.

I really like the expression on the one with the beret.



I know you can't change the aspect ratio, but I'd love to see one with the aspect ratio changed.



Also, as loathe as I am to admit that purple might not be the best backing color for something. I think part of why the center crow looks so odd is being against the purple. The grey version over to the side shows a lot more definition, but if you could find some other way to set off the tail against the purple that might help.

Err, which is to say that I think making them slightly taller to how wide they are would help the middle crow as well.