I hope suggestions to improve this design. Thanks Greetings to all

I'm pretty sure cats have 9 lives.

Cats have 9 lives don't they? Or am I missing something?

yeah its meant to be 9 :P

I agree with the critique, while the cat looks fine and the font works, you need a concept to back it up. Why does he have 7 lives instead of nine? have two horrible things happenned to him? How did he get to 7? these are things that you should explore and add to your concept in some way.



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better placement, and of course, change the 7 to 9, or show what happened to him to get 7 lives

Hello to all. Thanks for its suggestions and commentaries. Now I present/display my new version to them, hoping this design is better. I wait for its commentaries. Thanks.

I'd go for the left T, The right one has no many twirls going on.

I'd go for the left T, The right one has no many twirls going on.

sorry for the double entry