I don't like the pacman on the back of the shirt.. that should be on another shirt! But the front of the shirt is superb!! I think I'd like it more on white tho.. :)
If you have any comments on my design, feel free to do so!
Well, well... let me see if I can change something in a few hours. I'm at the office, hehe!! Now I'm thinking in space invaders instead of working, lol! :-D
Wow Snev, that 'superb' somehow gives me strength to carry on! :D
I have another critique, feel free to post there too: http://www.threadless.com/critique/15787/Bloody_Mary
I like the idea. Why not include one of the mario mushrooms in the design. I like version 2 with the pacman eating the space invaders. Nice design. submit!
Now everything it's placed in front of the shirt, what do you guys think? It's keeping the space invaders instead of dots, but probably it needs more games as some of you think, any ideas? :)
Thanks for the comments everyone! I hope you'll help me again :)
sorry to say this falls flat in comparison to the printed ones, the concept is not strong enough, not to be harsh but i dont think this would score well, if you wanna go on with a videogame design try giving it more thought, like the examples i've shown you
Indeed againstbound, I think that the idea is great, however those winning designs took the idea one step further. Rocio see if you can improve your idea to make something of a story with the video game images. I assume that there is already some sort of story with the tetris blocks going in the pipe and invaders coming out. i'm sure that there's something in this design waiting to come out.....
i love it, i just dont like how pacman's on the back. Maybe if u went back to V3 but put the pacman pipe trailing off to the right of the shirt (so our left). I think if i was wearing this it'd be a pain for people to come up to me and say "sweet shirt dude!" and then i'd have to say "wait there's more!" and turn around and lower my sweatshirt/jacket and stuff....its just a personal opinion tho..i dont like designs on the back unless the design needs to be on the back to flow well, and i think yours could do well on the front. Good luck. I'd buy it
i agree with earlier comments about using more references.. like Space Invaders, Frogger, Contra, Missile Command, Centipede, etc.. also i think the tetris pieces and pipe need to be smaller, especially if you add other references.. good luck on the next version!