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asher27
   asher27 on Feb 26 '08
based on a painting from my sketchbook...

on a side note, its supposed to snow 14 inches where i live tonight.



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asher27
   asher27 on Feb 27 '08
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loganwagner
loganwagner on Feb 27 '08
I think its pretty, but there is not enough of a story going on, just a tree in the snow. Have you though of adding some elements to the illustration, I don't know what it could be, maybe playing around with the bird a bit more...



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asher27
   asher27 on Feb 27 '08
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asher27
   asher27 on Feb 28 '08
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Squiddo
Squiddo on Feb 28 '08
I agree, it needs a little something more. Maybe a human element?
Tea10
Tea10 on Feb 29 '08
I like the simplicity of the design and the effect of the almost "unfinished" "painted" edges of the image. I think the tree itself needs a bit more tweaking. Some branches look a bit too thick in comparison with the "older" branches and the tree trunk.
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JadedAstroboy87
JadedAstroboy87 on Aug 11 '08
You have great t-shirt design skills. But yeah. Just got to get an eye provoking idea.



Like your style though. Keep up the good work.
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