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asher27
   asher27 on Feb 26 '08
from my sketchbook...

i just got a tablet for my birthday (best gift ever! if you dont already have one, i highly suggest getting one!) so this somewhat of a practice design / see where this goes.



i feel that it works best suprisingly on dark grey, although it looks nice on creme, pink, light purple, and purple.



the elephant is the colour of the shirt.
asher27
   asher27 on Feb 26 '08
bump... any comments, i see a dont submit, but why?
Solfree
Solfree on Feb 26 '08
nice concept I can see it on a shirt.
Solfree
Solfree on Feb 26 '08
Maybe needs to be cleaned up around the elephant human head.
asher27
   asher27 on Feb 26 '08
...bump
asher27
   asher27 on Feb 28 '08
bump
Squiddo
Squiddo on Feb 28 '08
I like the idea, it's really 'fantastical'-looking. I think maybe just clean up the lines a little bit. I like the cross hatching but maybe make the elephant's head a little clearer...



I hope this helps!
Tea10
Tea10 on Feb 29 '08
The elephant is a bit hard to see, and I don't quite understand how he's attached to the thundercloud, but I like the concept. It reminds me of the movie "stardust" - fantastical. =)
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thefivestar
thefivestar on Mar 08 '08
i dont get it.
imaginary_wanderer
imaginary_wanderer on Mar 08 '08
makes me think of discworld
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asher27
   asher27 on Mar 15 '08
thefivestar on Mar 08 '08

i dont get it.



theres nothing to get, its just a design
lucia_liquorice
lucia_liquorice on Mar 15 '08
reminds me of discworld, too :)

sweet idea, i like your handdrawing.

i think you should work on the elephant's bodyshape and face.



thanks for commenting mine:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/16627/just_a_kiss#v4
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