only two colours, first i had a lot of hair but that made it to chaotic.

it\'s very basic. the window had curtains but i removed them because it did not ad anything.

I am curious what you think.

Greetings from the netherlands

does someone have a comment?

odd placement sort of, the window doesnt work well it looks like its floating, but without the window the chick would make no sense.

maybe add something else in the room to show the light and shadows better. i like the overall concept, there's just something throwing it off. a transparent ink showing the path of the light coming through the window might help show that the stripes on the girl are cast shadows.

critique mine if you get a chance?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/15774/Grow_Individuality

I think it's awesome......

The girl could bea little more close to the windown...

I think the girl could be almost next to/covering the window (not covering like blocking, ike it is, but overlapping the window)

also, the woman is too well-lit. Light should be creating more shape on her body. You're relying too much on line and not enough on cast light.

and lastly, if you don't take any of my other advice - you should adjust the shadow on the body. the lines on the left side should get tighter/wider than they are on the right side. As it is, she just looks kinda striped.

thanks people, i will look at the design again. Does anyone else know a comment.

today i will change the design. So comments are welcome

I THINK ITS WOUNDERFULL!!!

do you think murder will score with threadless?

you can see that i made more perspective

someone?

I THINK YOU SHOULD LOOSE THE MURDER
ITS GREAT WITH OUT IT

thanks

I don't think the murder's a problem.

does anyone else see a lighting problem?

Yes the lighting should be angled...meaning the lines on the girl should be angled towards the bottom left. The murder can be in or out...but compositionally I think it works better without.