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I should say the outline of the spots is meant to be gold, not filled in or anything. Basically what's tan is meant to be gold as far as those spots are concerned.
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I think this could be good but right now I'm not liking the hard geometric or the wire-frame eyes. Maybe try using varied line widths to give more dimension.
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I agree with Keter about the geometric spots and line width, but I like the eyes. The nose and mouth look awesome.
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i think the eyes just need to be worked on and the rest is perfect
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Let me know what you think.