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v2 The Smartest Potato I Know, current version








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Version 1 - 656 days ago
Version 2 - 653 days ago

OOH_OOH
   OOH_OOH on Feb 26 '08
I added some roots and varied the sizes of the eyes a bit. Is it better? Thanks for your comments.
Sunshine69
Sunshine69 on Feb 26 '08
I'd like to see a different type of reflection off the lenses, the little windows look odd to me. I'd also like to see some of the eyes looking in different directions or blinking.

I also think the dark spots on the potato need a little work.

Also I wouldn't call it "Smartest Potato I know", because glasses don't make you smart. Maybe Myopic Spud, something like that.

I think it's funny and it's looking pretty good. Just needs a little more work.
Rachel Ray Gun
   Rachel Ray Gun on Feb 26 '08
this is sweet
OOH_OOH
   OOH_OOH on Feb 27 '08
Thanks Rachel Ray Gun but it looks like you're the only one. :(
chlobo107
chlobo107 on Feb 27 '08
Yeah, the roots really help. I think this is worth submitting if you work on the shadow - right now it doesn't fit with the illustration style.

Maybe rework the title a bit too. It's close, but not quite there.
OOH_OOH
   OOH_OOH on Feb 29 '08
bump.
EricDiaz
EricDiaz on Feb 29 '08
agreed with chlobo107 about the shadow.. i dont know if a potato is enough tho.. maybe add a corn husk with ears! that would be nice.. ill be back, check on my critique HERE
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OOH_OOH
   OOH_OOH on Mar 04 '08
bump.
keithcw
keithcw on Mar 04 '08
Agree agree. There are a few different visual styles going on here but i think with some attention paid to the eyes, glasses, dark spot and shadow this could prove to be extraordinarily grotesque. I like it.
empiricist
   empiricist on Mar 04 '08
I say add more sprouts?
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