Hi everyone! This is the first time I submit a critique design, I\'d like to know what do you think about what I\'ve done. I wanted to make a happy design with a retro style and combine it with my love for stars. Give me a feedback and a lot of advices! :)
Yes, maybe I could make the boy a little bigger, but not to much I think.. I didn't actually want to make him the "center" of the shirt, what do you think?
Ok, this time I made the kid and the rocket bigger and I added a few more stars all around, I think it's nice and "fuller" now, but I'm not sure if the Ursa major constellation is still visible. Any suggestion?
I don't like how the rainbow shoots up from the bottom of the shirt. I wish it started on the shirt and maybe even tapered to that starting point (maybe a planet or moon or something)
I think it's great, too. If you wanna make Ursa Major more visible, maybe you should shrink that "star" on the lower part of the shirt, the one closer to the rainbow.
Ok, thank you for your support :) Do you think there's a better day of the week to send a submission, considering that it should be online after like 4 days?
the only things you might want to consider before submitting this would be to make sure that the thickness of each color in the rainbow is consistent all the way through, and to make sure that all the curves are smooth.
other than that, I really like this design! very fun and reminiscent of a child's imagination.
