Still needs to be colored: but includes the likes of Captain America, Cyclops, Omega Red (when colored) Bishop, Cable, The Chameleon, Doctor Octopus and more. What do you all think?

i really like the drawing but would you add some color in the next version.. i dont know if you should use actual super heroes from comics and what not.. try to keep it 'super people' in general. cant wait to see the next one.

mine is up for voting!

http://www.threadless.com/submission/152430/READ_A_BOOK

This is a rough colored version, in case you missed the first description we have here: Captain America, Cyclops, Cat Woman, the Scarecrow, Bishop, Cable, The Chameleon, Doctor Octopus and more.

Comments are appreciated.

I added a little gradient thing to the back to make the image stand out a little more.

In case you missed the first description we have here: Captain America, Cyclops, Cat Woman, the Scarecrow, Bishop, Cable, The Chameleon, Doctor Octopus and more.

Comments are appreciated, really, or at least just vote on side.

Critique away please. All comments welcome.

What makes them "super" ? If they where heroes doing something common it would have been funnier...

We have here: Captain America, Cyclops, Cat Woman, the Scarecrow, Bishop, Cable, The Chameleon, Doctor Octopus and more.

What makes them super is their name.

I think you have a good idea here but some of the super people could use some work. Since you're being very literal you should have an actual army captain holding up America, maybe even do the flag inside it. Is the bear looking creature supposed to be Cable?! I like that some of them make you think which super hero it could be but who is the bald guy in the brown suit?

Adding some texture detail would make this less flat, chameleon scales/pattern, octopus tentacles, gray bishops staff, hairy cyclops, etc... Also i would remove that white square under the octopus. It's a cool idea just needs some more detail!

Some great suggestions from Eric there. I'd also remove the halftone background. The supers create a busy enough image and I think that background will just be distracting. It's a great idea, so it's worth putting your effort in to. Good luck.

In response, our brown creature friend is Wolverine (hard to draw) and the bald dude is professor x. I'm actually going to be working on a new base drawing, I've decided to be a little more true to how I actually draw, so expect that in a couple of days. Thanks for the comments, I think it really just needs to be redrawn.

cool idea

i also see the red skull and the green lantern. is that ghost rider? LOL, this is fun.

thanks for the comments I just drew another version, I'll scan it in.

So I decided to redraw it, and this is my new version. Ideas? Opinions? Advice? (besides coloring it)

Fantastic like the sketched look

looks nice. i hope the coloring goes well too

yeah, I'll be coloring it today probably then we'll see if it could use another revision or not, I'm thinking about adding the Penguin.

add a robot :P and the penguin
good luck with the colors!

please crit me too

batboy should be there.. u can have a kid in a baseball uniform.. and spiderman..

Ok, it's colored now, what do you guys think about the new and improved version?

do you guys think it's ready to go yet

anyone?

In case you missed the first description we have here: Captain America, Cyclops, Cat Woman, the Scarecrow, Bishop, Cable, The Chameleon, Doctor Octopus and more.

I did a little reworking on the line quality, a little less sketchy feel to it?

Which do you like better, this one or the one before? I also added the penguin and fixed wolverine.

I think version 5 on a white shirt would be good too. King pin? I don't get the guy riding the bull. Or the horseshoe.

Crit mine too plz.

The guy riding the bowl is actually riding a ghost... ghost rider. And the horseshoe is an omega sign, a red one... omega red. Yeah, Kingpin, he's a spiderman villain

i dont really like the red/yellow combinations.. too mcdonalds.. try a maroon or brown.. other than that its kool

Yeah, so I reworked it some more, redrew it and such, any ideas? Comments?

anyone?

i like is random-ness-ity perhaps you could develop the people more, make them a little more super.

hmmm i think there's something nice happening with the line quality in this. randomness is always great for me. hmmm i'm not sure how it would be as a tee. i dunno if it's the colors or what.
maybe play up randomness or make them interact. i dunno. looks like you've already put a lot of work into it.

I like version 5 or version 7 better, actually :-/ I really like the concept of your design though :)

Thanks, yeah, I can't really decide between the sketchier type feel or the cartoonier flatter feel. Anyone else like the sketchier style of version 7 better?

Sketchier. It just looks more organic. I like this, but I don't get the lizard. Still really sweet.

Sketchier is better.

Yeah, the lizard is Chameleon, I had him the same color as the background on the last round, but it didn't seem to work so well

I think this design works better with the sketchier style. it allows more perspective and makes the work alot cooler. Cool idea though!

this idea would look great as a print also...

If you have time, could you please critique mine? V5!!
http://www.threadless.com/critique/25029/SoundFlower

So yeah, I redrew it again, and went for a little livelier feel, and I think I liked the green background better after all..... what do you all think? Ready for submission?