What miss:
-SHADOWS
-SOME COLORS
-SOME PARTICULARS

i will update with version 2 soon!

Other then it is hanging of a nail, it's not that obvious just how small this house is. And hanging of a nail just doesn't look that good. Maybe if you had a painting or something like that next(or near) to the house

i add some shadows and details..

(sorry Chris Carney,i don't understand cause my bad english!)

He said it is not clear that the house is small. It looks big. Make it look small by using another object! like a painting next to it.

hm.. the top of the left chair looks broken, fix that I'd say.

The right side of the solar screen is still flled with white.

and also watch the number of colours you're using!
it's be a shame to get rejected cause of that..

Looks a lot better. Put some shutters on the top windows. And some curtains on the bottom windows

...you could have a cobbled pavement on the front

You could have a door number

Is this a hotel or house?

wow thanks a lot for the suggestion...it need much work!
chris it is an italian house

O.K..a bottle wine and two glasses then

This looks exactly like some wall art I've seen...little dioramas of sidewalk cafes. I think those who are into this sort of thing will recognize it for what it is. Maybe add a ladybug crawling on the awning to emphasize the scale.

"Keter on Feb 22 '08:
This looks exactly like some wall art I've seen...little dioramas of sidewalk cafes"

EXACTLY WHAT I MEAN!
IN THIS VERSION:
-I FIX THE CHAIR
-i add a bottle of italian wine
-i finish the grill

just a question: does the shadows count like an addition colors?

What about the wine glasses (two). And the inside curtains for the bottom windows. Some sort of metal grill for the top two windows. what about paving stones for the of the house. To show that the house is nail to a wall, show some cracks on the plaster where the nail is and some other places as well

i add two glasses..

i have too much colors before this version,now thredless can accept it..

waht do u think?

Read my last comment above

i add the grill for the top 2 windows (it was on the original project)

To show people that the house is nailed to wall. show cracks in wall or in the plaster which covers the wall. also cracks in other places to show that there is a wall there

You can even have some of the plaster missing, having fallen off

Lose the 50 Italy thing on the bottom, and finish cleaning up your fill in the awning ironwork. I liked the colors on v3 better.

on the v 3 version there were too many colors :(

i don't want to make "plaster mising" or cracks on the wall cause make the wall a poor one..

How will you show more clearly that this is a little house on a wall. You need more than just the house

something like that? i prefer VERSION 4

With the cracks you can tell it's nailed to the wall. maybe the crack could be on the wall as well to show that the wall is there

I'm not sure I'm understanding the concept. Why would someone wear a wall hanging of a sidewalk cafe on a shirt?

Also, army is a really ugly color. Maybe replace the nail with a thumbtack to emphasize size/scale? I think it'll be more recognizable than your nail.

LutePlay on Feb 27 '08 : "I'm not sure I'm understanding the concept. Why would someone wear a wall hanging of a sidewalk cafe on a shirt?"

the same reason for THREADLESS EXISTS..what a stupid question in a design site...

i send version 04
thanks to all

i want to send it again...but with different colours..

i love it ... different colours would be cool :)

please comment and vote on mine:

http://www.threadless.com/submission/180760/Mother_Nature