Looking forward to some critiques on this piece. Thanks in advance!

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Any thoughts on this anyone? :D

Can't decide if I like the colored birds or the blue ones..

I like the colored ones. just make sure they don't overlap thelarger ones.

critique mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/15646/I_m_sorry

I like the plain blue ones personally. The only thing that really bothers me is the big birds are all the same. Try and get some variation in them, but otherwise a cool design.

Blue, definitely. Change the big birds and we'll talk.

maybe lose the big birds altogether. How about a few sitting on the lines instead...

Thanks for your comments! I removed the colored birds (which may in turn change the name of the piece) and went with all blue birds in the background.

I changed up the white birds so there's a variation and added some birds to the wire. The only difference between the two mockups is the white bird in the middle of the shirt.

Thanks in advance for your comments, I look forward to taking this a step further.

I like the one sans the bird in the middle. Great design otherwise. $5!

Thanks!

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get rid of two birds sitting on the powerline. you only need the one on the upper shoulder. They probably won't print the desing on the sleeves, so loose the extra grey birds and power lines and reposition accordingly. Toward the bottom, the three straight lines go in, but there are 2 angled lines coming out (that are kinda hard to see, so I could be mistaking) .

That's all I see right now.

Oh, my bad, lower one. . .

I really like the design, i agree with the removing of a few white birds. The shirt color is also nice! Great design.

critique mine?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/15666/Let_It_All_Out

i like the ones in the powerline, but I would leave just one of them.

I agree with geting rid of the one in the center, it's a good idea but I'm not loving the position, and the design looks perfectly fine without it.

please critique if you can...

http://www.threadless.com/critique/15646/I_m_sorry

i like the perspective of this design its cool!

Thanks again for your comments! I got rid of all of the white birds but one and cut the cables before the sleeve as I think you're right in saying they wouldn't want to print that.

I also rearranged the blue birds a bit to give it a better flow. Thanks in advance for your comments!

PS - I have NO IDEA why I'm having trouble submitting this file.. everytime I add a new version it adds a blank one in front of it so this is technically Version 4

Hate to say it, but I prefered the color. Otherwise it's a little too... blah. A lot of bird designs get submitted. Youneed yours to stand out.

if you want absolute honesty: this won't get printed. threadless sees birds on phonewires designs multiple times A WEEK and i can't remember even one ever being printed. it's not a fresh idea, so as hard as you work on this, chances are once you submit it, it won't last more than a day. threadless users score bird on wires designs extremely low because frankly we're tired of them.
i'd suggest you just move on from this and start on something unique and exciting.

The bird theme has been done and redone on Threadless. It may be risky submitting it, because it isn't an original idea.

I agree with Ginette... this isn't to be ruin your design, but to give you a heads up...because there is already much that has been sent in with birds

Hey, thanks for your comments and I think I may agree. I'll work on something different that will be more unique.

Thanks!

The shirt, on its own, is great. There are a lot of birds out there, though. Think about a flock of something else.

I love this shirt.

i like this design. something everyone can recognise and relate to. simple yet effective.

Thats really beautiful. Very eye catching :)