This is an illustration that I did, looking for feedback as to whether or not it would make a cool Threadless tee. Thanks in advance!

I like it but all the colors seem to blend together near that crater you have. Maybe try making the smoke a bit darker or something.

Also, I like the jagged bits on the outside of the ground but they look a bit too round. I think I would like them if they were a bit sharper.

Care to check my design out?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/15389/Retro_Pirate

Thanks! I see what you mean, I guess I was meaning for it to look dried out kind of like the moon or a distant dry planet.

this is awesome.
I dont think it needs the glass "cockpit"


critique mine?
www.threadless.com/critique/15137/Mikey_and_the_Monster

those damn robot crabs, ruining my pick-a-nick again

*bump*

I like the "robot crab" and even the cockpit. I think the terrain needs to be changed though.

I really liked this one, any comments?