Hey guys, please comment on is, give me some ideas for making it better. I already submitted this for a critique and no one commented or anything. So please give me inspiration!

Well, I think you have something here with the TV-headed monster. The rest of it isn't doing much for me. Your TV-monster makes me think you could use this as a metaphor to make a statement or maybe just make fun of all the worrywarts who think TV is a corrupting influence on society. You could make more people, and give them more weight, and put one actually in the monster's mouth. Make people running away and the background a little less blah (those current buildings aren't doing much for the design). make the scenery look more destroyed. Think about some more interesting usage of color. Good luck! :)