It\'s kinda \'emo\' as a friend put it. Please let me know how i can improve it!

The color contrast is a bit much. I would have to suggest the light yellow shirt and make the hearts white with a dark yellow/gold outlining.

Good idea! I am playing with shirt/heart colors and trying to get it just right.

I would think white shirt would be okay if you made the water can green or gray. Basically anything *but* blue -- blue-red is a bad color contrast and it causes eye-strain pretty much across the board. If you're really set on blue and want red hearts, you'll have to border the hards with some other color to avoid the eye-strain -- a thin border of just about any color would probably work. You could use either black or white which you already have in your design, so you wouldn't be depleting your color availability.



Nice concept. Simple, not too elaborate. Only thing that springs to mind as an addition is the possibility of flowers at the bottom.

Changed watering can color, not sure what to do for the inside of it yet... also changed the color of the shirt. Should I add flowers?

this color of t-shirt is much better! but for me design looks too simple. I don't know about adding flowers. I think firstly create an idea of design, what exactly you try to show us and after that improving design will be easier! right now, it is little bit weak. Sorry. But good start! think abt idea! Good luck!

I like the idea... Great minds think alike I suppose... ;)



http://www.threadless.com/critique/15187/Shower_with_Love

sorry to be so miserable, but this is far too cutesy and just a naff idea. The perspective is off on the watering can and the hearts are to clean to fit in witht he style of the can.

'course... if people are complaining about it being too cutesey, you could always go way the other way -- you said originally it was a bit "emo" ... so you could say put the heart inside the watering can, with a rusty nail sticking through it and blood dripping off the nail into the can and then running out the end of the nozzle on the watering can. :) Give it a real gritty feel. Flowers at the bottom could be growing out of a rock and mostly wilted.

p.s. I updated the Pigasus design

Great idea Isaac!

looks like the idea is already taken!



critique mine, too?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/14973/S0_Where_do_we_go_now

I would like to see the water can drawing a little smoother. Otherwise it is wonderful.



Score it before it's too late!

a bit cliche, imo.