a break from the normal style but i thought the cartoony'ness suited this idea better. let me know what you think

'Babybell', living on a knife edge! nice idea

haha, well done bro, love the faces!!

haha, y thankyou, cheers folks. any issues with the text?

I don't quite understand what is going on with cheddar's wrapper. Also the crayon effect on the faces isn't quite working

The concept is great but you need to work on the composition and style before you sub

ok, so the feedback on the idea seems pretty positive, i'll sketch out some new compositions and upload a new version soon