I tried for a more cartoony head. Also, I changed the shirt color and the placement. Would this be better with no ballooon at all? A realistic head? different colors? different placement?



Thanks for looking!

i like the head lots more better

I actually like the balloon, but the red makes it look a bit like, I don't know, a tumor. How about blue? Also with red + green there's the whole xmas association.

different color ballooon. also shown on denim

1 or 2? or does something else need changing?

night bump

in my original design, some people said they would prefer it with no balloon at all. let me know what you think. thanks!

I like it with no balloon too -- It's awesome

I prefer it with no balloon.



I think it'd also be neat if the guy's face had that "I'm holding my breath" expression on it. Puff the cheeks out, tighten the mouth and widen the eyes. ;)

thanks! i'll try doing that KM3. which color do you like best?

tweek his left foot/shoe too^^

okay! thanks for the help

yea - no balloon - what about the knot on the bottom of his head?

i agree with Monkey III, but i also believe that a change of placement is in order.

more to one side, i think left.

good luck!

also - his expression is great but what if his eyes were watching where he is walking

I like both of ISABOA's last suggestions- especially having a knot on the bottom of his head.

i agree no balloon and put a knot at the bottom of his head

agree no balloon

hm. didn't get bumped.

yea! - I think It looks SWEET

thanks man! thanks for all the help!

those who say "work on it", what do you want changed?

it 's cool and funny whta about the outlines they are wider than the inner ones?is it on purpose..anyway it's such a funny design:)

yeah i purposely made the inner ones smaller, otherwise it would be blobby. if i used the thin ones outside, the design might get lost on the shirt. thanks!

you did right with the lines schleb -

thanks. when i get 10 submits, i'll submit it.

I like the design, i'm trying to decide if it would be too corny to have the head more balloon shaped...just an idea...

the head looks like you.

His foot looks tiny.

im glad you took my advice on placement, but i believe that the foot on the ground (towards the back) could use a bit of tweaking, and then it'll be ready to be submitted.

good luck!

:)

okay, i'll work on the foot. thanks!

anything besides the foot?

perhaps belt loops?

i dont know, i think it's pretty damn good already, and that the foot is the only thing lacking.

:)

good luck, and sub soon.

his right leg is just annoying me... maybe because his leg is freakishly straight..

I still prefer V1



But... what if he was holding a whole bunch of balloon heads?

^^^^^Agreed. Many baloon heads.

*balloon

Since someone mentioned his leg being super straight, I can't stop thinking about that when I see it. It is a really cool design, but now when I see it I think of that.

okay so straightened leg and bigger foot?



maybe i'll also put together a version with a bunch of heads. i like that idea

Smaller on the shirt.

Not my kind of tee but vastly improved on the design! Good Work!

okay, thanks :)

I reeeaaaallly like this one. I prefer it with no balloon too, but I'd buy it either way. ISABOA's suggestions were all worth it. I'd buy it now but I'd be interested in seeing if you could fix his leg (same problem.. once I looked at it I couldn't look away!)

gaaah. i can't draw feet. is this improved at all?

I think it is, but maybe make the back leg a little shorter.

love it

could you comment on mine back? all feedback is welcome and needed!

I wasn't as bothered by the straight leg, but this will work. Only trouble is the forward leg looks small. Might make the back leg a bit smaller, but the front definitely needs to be bigger since it's in the foreground.

i like the straight leg better, it looks like he is power strutting -

yea... i like the straight leg better too. maybe i'll just submit that. the angled leg looks really awkward.



yeah. i just critiqued my own design

yeah - 17 submit this is plenty to go forward , I think it will do well!

thanks for all your help on this!

like it!

Just make the face look a little better and more detailed then submit it!

IT'S UP. vote and comment pleease :)

clicky

done

thanks!

Nice concept. I don't know if each piece "goes" together well, though. I'd either give the face more detail, or lose some of the detail in the body.

good one. submit it.



give suggestions on my design too

http://www.threadless.com/critique/63118/me_she_we