A book belongs with any survival kit, it may even save your life.

So get off your computer, stop watching TV and read a book!

critique! me!

FUNNY...OH AND THANKS FOR THE COMMENT

i COMMENTED ON YOUR OTHER ONE BUT THIS IS TO CUTE!... LOL

Its actually a shovel.. spades are flatter, but i do agree with making it look more like a survival kit.. Oh yea, without the message it would just be confusing. The message is the essence of this design.



thanks reddiamond, lol

I dont know why its stretched out? But i changed the colors up, and added some other subtle details.. critique anyone?

i like

thank you

Very nice. I'd definitely buy it if you submitted it and it won.

I also like it... I especially like the color of the version on the right

thanks guys, i think im going to add a compass as a finishing touch

last chance for critique..

Positive Expression.



A book belongs with any survival kit, it may even save your life.

So get off your computer, stop watching TV and go read a book!

any thoughts?

thats it, im submitting

my aunt is a mail women and this really offended me... you asshole

go for it. submit away! :)

Jcron what the hell are you talking about? what does your aunt being a mail woman have to do with this?

I don't get the stuff below the book..



..or maybe i'm just stupid.

thats a possibility izzy.. go to V1 to get the explanation

I'm dying to know what the hell Jcron was talking about.

exactly, cuz that was totally random.. lol

yea, i already submitted it..

Looks nice!

did he say male-woman?

dont ask me man, check out my newest critique



http://www.threadless.com/critique/15500/Breakthrough

OK, this one is in the running!



http://www.threadless.com/submission/152430/READ_A_BOOK

come on guys, vote on this design:



http://www.threadless.com/submission/152430/READ_A_BOOK

as a hiker, i can appreciate this!



If you have a moment...

http://www.threadless.com/critique/15387/milk

no doubt man, vote on it if you havent already.. the link is up there ^

Nice idea, but maybe it needs to be simplified somehow... I like the tools etc but I'm not sure about the book drawing though. Have you tried to keep the slogan separate?

yea i tried that.. it looked better in the book. anyways its in the running you can comment there..

i like it but would i see it black ink on the shirt that i dunt like much i would go for this right design color u made alone or maybe use some more colors why not the medic box in white and red cross i see this design more in white red black colors, and u just put it maybe on black or white shirt

also the book colors, just need some more choices and changes

^what?!

I think it would be stronger without the words? The image is enough