Your comments and suggestions would be appreciated.

The pale blue / green above the main design represent his dreams. They're supposed to be faint & vague. Is it too pale to make out?

Actually, it's very pretty. Very delicate and very cool....I like how one of his dreams is to fly! I don't see anything wrong at all....sub!

Wow - thanks, PBC.

Anyone else?

I love the subtleness of the backround(driving squirel is my favorite)(running kind of looks like a wookie ;) , Also great illustration. Is it hand drawn or illustrator? anyway i'd say the sooner you submit, the sooner im wearing it :)



what do you think of mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/14910/Casual_Friday

hell yeah. love the sloth. Id almost prefer it without the background, but I'd buy anyway.

I don't like the colors of shirt you have picked... might be cooler on a green? I also think you might consider changing the layout of the images... but not the actual drawings, i dunno. Amazing illustration though. good job.

i didnt read the title, I ment sloth not squirrel (i was reading you name)

dylanufl - I wanted it to be on green originally but I didn't find one dark enough in the catalogue. I tried it on navy & charcoal, too. Will have another play with the layout.

Thanks to all who took the time to comment.

i like it on the dark grey, this is an amazing illustration. i agree with skauf11 he looks like a wookie in some of his dream selves. maybe tweak that a bit or maybe have him hanging out in a tree instead of running since sloths are known for being extremely slow

Good morning - anyone else?

this is a clever shirt, and the illustration is lovely... but i would prefer to see it on a lighter color to make the illustration stand out a bit more....maybe like natural or sand.

I'm agreeing with the people who think that this is on the wrong colour so will rework it.

Thanks for your help, all who contributed.

yea, you made the sloth himself look like a sloth, but in his dreams he's like a sloth/man, or maybe a weresloth? idk. anyways, i seriously doubt a sloth would dream about having a furry human body. love the concept and execution tho!

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i love this. have you considered glow ink?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/15231/Story_of_my_life