Soooo, before commenting, ask yourself: can you tell what\'s going on???



It was supposed to be a lollipop tree, and the thing in the left side is a kid\'s hand sticking out from the ground grasping a lollipop

Methinks it is not clear.

Any suggestions? I was thinking of making it more like lollipop island??

hello!

i liked something about your design, but

i agree that it didnt feel quite clear...

i'm not sure they looked like lollipops to me

so maybe make em more red and white and big and round...

else they look like roses

and maybe make the kids hand a different colour to the tree?



why has the kids hand got no body?



pls crit me if yuo have a mo!

here

here

or even here!



thanks!

Thanks! I'll keep working on it!