I wanted to do a simple, 1 color design, so here it is it is.

Snake needs scales. Bird needs more feather definition.

yeah right now the wings are weird it looks liek the bird has tons of them the idea is cool though so keep at it

The bird looks kinda saggy... I agree on more feather definition. I like the design and placement though. Colour scheme is also pretty.

make bird flap its wings

I think the bird needs to be flying, like kojima says. Then it makes sense. And I totally agree with adding the scales and feather definition.

Flap those wings B'y!!!

I think your intention is that the snake is confused with a tree branch, but it is a bit annoing, it looks as if snake, bird and mouse are falling down, making the bird flying will give this a lot more dinamism. Otherwise, great colors, drawing and idea.

You can do it without flying too by making many stakes form a tree. Then the bird could be resting in a "tree".

My vote for more detail also. I like what got here.

i love how your one colour drawing can make such unique and special !!! SUPER $5!!!

You HAVE to make the owl flying, like he just hunted the snake. Better yet... A bald eagle. If you choose to leave it standing fix the damn owl. He has a strange condition right now. Also, agree on the scales on the snake. My .02.

It has this JOHN2 feel to it. I like.

Is it possible add some detail on the snake and the bird? Or the simple rendering just what you want for this design?

maybe if the owl has the mouse, and the snake is hanging from the mouse in his mouth... nha.. just make the owl fly.

only on the snake! The rest is perfect.

to me the bird looks like a cross between an owl and an eagle..

more texture dagnabit! solid idea though.

you're weird slate...sometimes weirder than me.



yeh i guess add more detail to the feathers

the bird seems too perched it would need to be in flight to have it all come together

flap the wings.

almost there, just need snake scales!

version two in the hizzouse!

much much better .. kinda odd Im working on a sub with the same color scheme as this ...thats the only similarities though

Looks way better. Add scales and I'll check my vote.

werds.

Wow, much more effective! Good work!

Oh and I agree that the scales would be a nice touch... Even some sort of minor texture difference.

so, scales and anything else?

How bout some fur on mouse? Or if you want to go another level, some cheese (or something) in the mouse's paws...looks great tho!

dacat, i don't think i'll go with cheese, but I might add some more fur details to the mouse

MUCH BETTTTER

Excellent! Just some scales and you're set!