WORK IN PROGRESS.



just wanna make the entierly clear.



im out of ideas for now, so, comments and suggestions please!



thanks

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/090208/17845_okay.jpg

larger image



(how do you make links btw?)

that's a little bit confusing, maybe work on the composition.

im deff redoing parts.

You can make links by adding the tag.

You then enter the source for it... for example... . tuh-dah. As for ideas... i HAVE NO CLUE. Maybe godzilla? lol

the tag being a href="your source here" then close your tag.

you already almost have godzilla up there... nvmd

nothing seems to really fit together. even the artwork style. try to make it flow a bit more

need to bring it all together. cool style though

revamped.

i don't know how special inks work but silver foil?

i like the wolf and how its not cliche howling at the moon.. the moon is original too.. as for the splatters around them.. i dunno.. also the tail of the wolf looks strange, why make it so long.. but i do like the colors light gray looks good here.



my design is up for voting!



http://www.threadless.com/submission/152430/READ_A_BOOK

i do believe this is a bump

I like this one.. without the moon tho. So loose the moon and I'd buy!

the moon? really??

i liked it :(

keep the moon man!

still looking for a few more comments on the shirt before i change anything, and i always look at your critiques/slogans as well :P if you post



also, did you see the birds? :O look closely at the moon splatters :)

yes

I like it and I think silver foil would look spiffy. I'm with EricDiaz on the tail; why so long and...um...hair-like?





I have a couple different designs up but would really like input on this one (it seems to be the most promising...): http://www.threadless.com/critique/15877/With_the_Band

what's with digging out designs that have been long subbed?

i mostly just follow trails, like, click on your name, then people who comment on yours, sorry, thats my fault.



i should be checking the days it's been released.

its ok, just seemed strange since they're not just at sight like more recent crits

changed the tail

Is there a reason the head is hanging? The typical depiction of wolf and moon would have it howling. I like the break from the status quo, just wondering if there was a specific idea behind it.



I like the design (I like the moon, go figure).

I like this one right here, not sure there is anything else you could do to make it better, but just a minor tweak here and there. I like it though





Vote/comment?

www.threadless.com/submission/153701/Peace_takes_flight

thanks!



tweaks, are nice :P

but i don't know if it's print worthy yet.

awesome! I love the almost 'dripping' image of the moon's splatters? dust? hahah. Very nice effect.

thanks :D tea10!

those who post with "needs work" please say what to work on.

zoom.

i'm not sure about the moon.

it needs some work, the holes it it are almost too much.

Too many spatters? Or - the wolf and moon don't look like they jive with the spatters.

I like it, i think the wolf usually howls though, or maybe if it's some twist, you could specify it.



Maybe you could commento on mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/16379/maybe_it_s_not_that_easy_anymore

I love the simplicity of this. Maybe his head is down because he is looking at a reflection of the moon. That would mean adding the indication of a pond with the moon reflection. Or maybe his head is upturned like he is howling......but the sound bubble says......meow?

Just some thoughts, for what they are worth. All the best!

How about more connection between the wolf and the moon itself?



If you don't mind, would you leave a comment and a vote on my Panda?