My entry for Seed Loves...

Not yet final, but any color suggestions, guys? :)

bump?

It's hard for me to tell where this is going.

Nice to see you around again, man!

thats cool!

yeah, ikaw rin, long time no see, kaloyster!

sobrang kapos sa freetime eh... XD

Royal

navy

or black??

which tee color? which tee color? any other suggestions? :) thanks!!!

and.. oh, is the cold front thingy noticeable enough?^^

bump

bummp

I don't understand the elevation lines. Never seen them on a weather map before and it skews the viewing perspective (not using this as the art term).

Also stop bumping your design. It's annoying.

is this a boat going into a vagina made of elevation lines with a sunny bush? if so, looks like the forcast is WET!

sorry for the bumping, I'm afraid I got too excited.

Thanks for expressing your confusions. Btw, the lines weren't meant to be elevation lines, but they are isobars. Just like the bars here: 1
and 2

So what should I do to improve the design?

so, should I pass this as is, or what more work can I do here? ^^

i thought seed loves was over

I like it :)

I really like the idea but right now it'S a little bit too confusing. Too many lines make it hard to figure out. Maybe if you fill in the sun (and probably the clouds and maybe even the raindrops)?

thanks!

thanks for the comment tuppe. I'm afraid though that I already submitted one of these in the running. I thought no one else would respond seriously for the critique. Nonetheless, thanks still! If I will submit a second version, I'd do those! ^^