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Quag
   Quag on Feb 04 '07
During the Super Bowl halftime show I got a bit inspired :) What do you guys think? I really want to sub this as-is because as always, when I design I usually just make the stuff I'd wear :)
The Crackers
The Crackers on Feb 04 '07
took me a while to get but i like it



The Crackers
The Crackers on Feb 04 '07
work on the cloud a bit
mooseinmyshoe
mooseinmyshoe on Feb 04 '07
i absoultey love this idea
mooseinmyshoe
mooseinmyshoe on Feb 04 '07
i cannot spell that word...shit
schleb
schleb on Feb 04 '07
yeah, work on the cloud. otherwise, i like it. i like that it isn't really obvious at first
nillawaferwu
nillawaferwu on Feb 05 '07
Clever. I agree with the rest of the comments about the cloud. To be honest, when I saw the title, I thought for sure there'd be a king in a purple cape in here somewhere with the rain...but maybe that's overdoing it :)
jet approves
jet approves on Feb 05 '07
Also, maybe it's just me, but it took me a while to read the words in the rain. Is there any way you can make it a little easier to read?
Dappled Hen
Dappled Hen on Feb 05 '07
fix the cloud and I'll buy it.
tfsr
tfsr on Feb 05 '07
I thought the same thing as nillawaferwu. :o

The cloud needs to be fluffier, and, well, more cloud-like.

Right now, it looks like a rug or some pita bread.

And the words need to be more defined if possible. :]
queen bean
queen bean on Feb 05 '07
I don't know, I like that it's a bit hard to read at first. If it's too easy to read the cheese factor goes way up. Like from, "Oh, that's cool." to, "Yeah, yeah, yeah, peace, love 'n shit. Whatever."

I agree with the others about the cloud... bigger, puffier and cloudier.

I would buy it.
chelly
chelly on Feb 05 '07
if you are going to have the word "reign" then i think there should something that incorporates it into the design



i could be wrong though



it happens
Petanca
Petanca on Feb 05 '07
I find this really hard to read
janeekins
janeekins on Feb 05 '07
1) it's about communication, nothing should be that hard to read. 2) why reign if there's not connection in the graphic it may as well be rain. 3) a cloud is a cloud, why does it look like a space ship? Lots of work required here.
snittleface
snittleface on Feb 05 '07
the cloud is my favorite part!
mooseinmyshoe
mooseinmyshoe on Feb 05 '07
may come off as a bit "pro life"



but i still love it. i feel that titles don't have to mean anything to anyone...they are a representation of the artist/author/creator. why not reign? why go along with the norm.





i still love the idea
Edword
   Edword on Feb 05 '07
I like the idea, but the clud needs some work IMO. Maybe try saying something else in the rain? It could be cool.
S_Laughter
S_Laughter on Feb 05 '07
The text isn't very visible, but cool idea.
katbrown
katbrown on Feb 05 '07
I like the cloud as it is!
Quag
   Quag on Feb 05 '07
I jumped the gun on this and subbed it yesterday as is when I only had 3 or so comments. As of now I can only wait and hope it does well :) After that I can make changes, because I really enjoy it as is (which is silly because I subbed it to be critiqued :S). Thanks for everyons feedback :)
MooseDinner
MooseDinner on Feb 06 '07
agree with mooseinmyshoes that it could be seen as pro life.

maybe change: peace love hope life to peace love hope sex or burritos or something
blue mango
blue mango on Feb 07 '07
It is ok but i think you can do a better job
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Jojolo
Jojolo on Jul 24 '08
Jojolo so grieved. The unique thing that I know is that she is Spanish, by all means as you you say so straight I cannot really read it in all…
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