During the Super Bowl halftime show I got a bit inspired :) What do you guys think? I really want to sub this as-is because as always, when I design I usually just make the stuff I'd wear :)

took me a while to get but i like it

work on the cloud a bit

i absoultey love this idea

i cannot spell that word...shit

yeah, work on the cloud. otherwise, i like it. i like that it isn't really obvious at first

Clever. I agree with the rest of the comments about the cloud. To be honest, when I saw the title, I thought for sure there'd be a king in a purple cape in here somewhere with the rain...but maybe that's overdoing it :)

Also, maybe it's just me, but it took me a while to read the words in the rain. Is there any way you can make it a little easier to read?

fix the cloud and I'll buy it.

I thought the same thing as nillawaferwu. :o

The cloud needs to be fluffier, and, well, more cloud-like.

Right now, it looks like a rug or some pita bread.

And the words need to be more defined if possible. :]

I don't know, I like that it's a bit hard to read at first. If it's too easy to read the cheese factor goes way up. Like from, "Oh, that's cool." to, "Yeah, yeah, yeah, peace, love 'n shit. Whatever."

I agree with the others about the cloud... bigger, puffier and cloudier.

I would buy it.

if you are going to have the word "reign" then i think there should something that incorporates it into the design



i could be wrong though



it happens

I find this really hard to read

1) it's about communication, nothing should be that hard to read. 2) why reign if there's not connection in the graphic it may as well be rain. 3) a cloud is a cloud, why does it look like a space ship? Lots of work required here.

the cloud is my favorite part!

may come off as a bit "pro life"



but i still love it. i feel that titles don't have to mean anything to anyone...they are a representation of the artist/author/creator. why not reign? why go along with the norm.





i still love the idea

I like the idea, but the clud needs some work IMO. Maybe try saying something else in the rain? It could be cool.

The text isn't very visible, but cool idea.

I like the cloud as it is!

I jumped the gun on this and subbed it yesterday as is when I only had 3 or so comments. As of now I can only wait and hope it does well :) After that I can make changes, because I really enjoy it as is (which is silly because I subbed it to be critiqued :S). Thanks for everyons feedback :)

agree with mooseinmyshoes that it could be seen as pro life.

maybe change: peace love hope life to peace love hope sex or burritos or something

It is ok but i think you can do a better job

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