A work in progress.



Postapocalyptic setting, the animals survived the decay of the human race and the world they created.



This is supposed to be semi-abstract, a bit of a mash-up.





I would really like critique on how to improve this, and better name suggestions are welcome too.

pretty sweet. i like it and i think others will too. sub it.

I like this. I hope the completed version has more detail in the background, or you at least vary the weight of the lines. Also I’m not a big fan of how rigid that hairy creature looks. Maybe do something with its arms other than just having them tucked into its sides.

i love this! wonderful detail. i think the bird attracts too much attention because he is the largest shape and is mostly yellow. maybe if there was more yellow spread throughout the design to even it out. also the snake doesn't look nearly as good as the dragon, maybe work on his head a bit. awesome start!

Okay thanks guys.



I reworked the hairy/beary animal in the center.

I worked on varying the line width in the background.

I added more yellow to the whole thing.





Any better?

I personally think the yellow is too bright. at least how it is on the hairymanbeast thing in the center.



I like the bat a lot, I wish he was more of a focal point maybe if you could move him to where the bird is and move the bird so its sitting on that pipe??

Made the hairy beary thingguy a bit less flashy. Also changed the green in the background, stood out too much.





I think this is (almost?) done?

Now with extra birds!

is that a bird by the pipe? dont think thats necessary,



did u try the arrangement I suggested.



sorry its just the bat rendering is really cool, i think it should stand out more.

I haven't really tried it, but to be honest, I think the big bird sitting on the tree root/pipe takes away from the weirdness of this, as he is currently going behind the pipething.





The little birdie was just a joke, seeing as there were complaints about why the heck do so many subs have birds in them xD I would have let it out on the real sub I guess.





But is the bearmanthingie better than before?

this is going well, keep up the little details work.

This is the best one so far.

I love it but maybe simplify the design a little so it isn't so busy!

I like the sewage river dragon. The bird seems to be about ready to fall. If you could somehow make it look like its resting on something or holding on more naturally it'd release some of that tension.

Thanks for the suggestions.



Changed a couple things:



The bird now clings to the treeroot/pipe thing next to him with his wing.



Added some texture to the powerplants in the background.



Made the big dark guy in the back be a big mutant rat thing. Fits the whole sewer nasty look methinks.



Generally detailed a bit more.

damn this is looking great, id love to see how it looks on a tee, the only thing i can think needs fixing is the halftone on the immersed part of the ratking, it stands out too much from the rest of the designs, proabaly just making his legs more solid but with water ripples would do it, but maybe im the only one that thinks it needs fixing, great work!

Yeah you're right, it stood out too much.

I made it fit with the style a bit more now. While they still read as legs, right?



Also added t-preview, nice and big, wraparound.

Perhaps just a little bit too big, but I'll finetune that.

this is sweet. i love how i keep noticing new stuff! i'm sorry i don't have anything constructive to say.



the legs look better than the previous version.