I\'d appreciate your thoughts on this; thanks in advance to all of you that take the time.

Concept is okay, but execution is a little rough. The devil's body parts seem out of proportion, and it could benefit from a slightly broader color range. (Actually, you've got all the colors you need, but you've confined the brightest colors to only a few tiny spots -- the duck, the lemon slice, and the horns.)

pretty bad ass, satan's always cool. he looks like he's made out of plastic with such a small, super bright highlight on everything.

So it's too dark... the proportions - I thought it was funny to give him wierd little legs - should I make them bigger? Any other thoughts?

i'm worried about it making a rectangle shape once it is on the shirt.

I agree with the comment on the rectangular shape. I also think the bottle on the left distracts. The outline of the bubbles in broken white lines doesn't look quite right to me. Also, instead of a cocktail, maybe a few candles with wax dripping down? I'd also like to see some sort of suggestion of a tub. Overall I really like this and think it's a cool idea. I think it would be funnier if the duck didn't have horns. Just my two cents. Great job so far.

I can't say I agree with the rectangular shape until I see it on the shirt, but I do think the white lines stand out too much, and the one right by his pec kind of looks like a boob. Also his arms aren't really anatomically correct in that position, but I do really like what you did with the water.

Thanks for your comments; it won't be square when it's done. Olie, you're right about the arms and the white lines & I like the idea of the candles - thanks Sunshine. I really do appreciate the thought that's gone into your comments. Cheers.

What about the subject matter do you think it's just not a shirt?

look scary....