How is the perspective on the pencils? Which background color is better?

hahaha, i stabbed a kid in the shoulder with a pencil in 3rd grade.

I like the brown.

I would like to submit this- is there something specific I should change, or should I submit it as it is?

this hurts my vampire heart

Is that good or bad? bad if you actually are a vampire, I guess.

I'm not big on the design, maybe because I'm not into bloody stuff. But I'm sure there are people who like to wear it. I think black is a good color for a t-shirt...works well against the pencil and blood tones.

I like the concept the only issue I have is 2 pencils on a shirt, is that special enough to spend $25? I don't know!

needs more pencils! and the blood should be a little less bright. make it look more like the blood is soaked into the shirt. funny idea i love it

I'm not into bloody stuff either, but if you're going to go violent, I say go all the way. I'd like to see at least half a dozen pencils, maybe a pair of scissors. The top pencil looks too long to me. Not sure you need so much blood either, maybe just the spots, without the drips.

Thank you everyone for helpful comments! There are only two pencils because I was trying not to go over the top, but I'll try another version with more pencils and less blood (but more realist).

More realistic blood, I mean.

I think it needs more work, maybe make it look more realistic, less colors might work.



Critique mine pls



http://www.threadless.com/critique/13945/BFF

no thanks. don't care for the bloody stuff. i think more pencils would make it worse.

I would like to see pencils on the front and back of the shirt