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v1 She Shouted, But To No Avail, 1898 days ago, click to expand
v2 She Shouted, But To No Avail, 1897 days ago, click to expand
v3 She Shouted, But To No Avail, 1897 days ago, click to expand
v4 She Shouted, But To No Avail, 1897 days ago, click to expand
v5 She Shouted, But To No Avail, 1897 days ago, click to expand
v6 She Shouted, But To No Avail, 1897 days ago, click to expand
v7 She Shouted, But To No Avail, current version








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The Results
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Versions...
Version 1 - 1898 days ago
Version 2 - 1897 days ago
Version 3 - 1897 days ago
Version 4 - 1897 days ago
Version 5 - 1897 days ago
Version 6 - 1897 days ago
Version 7 - 1897 days ago

fatheed
   fatheed on Mar 16 '07
I can still make the blokes nipple red like a dogs weiner, but I think in order to get more people on board, I needed to cover up the lady - as her knockers were a bit too much for some people, and might be the difference between peeps being prepared to wear it or not.



Ver 1 is very 2-d compared to ver 7 and I'm thinking the wider voting public might prefer 7. I am appreciating your comments/guidance!
colin_Brights
colin_Brights on Mar 16 '07
i don't like it on blue, and i prefer version one. But it's really great either way
wotto
   wotto on Mar 16 '07
fat heed are u scottish?
fatheed
   fatheed on Mar 16 '07
Ach, noooo. Welsh. And honorary English
wotto
   wotto on Mar 16 '07
just the heed thing made me think u were
Krycke
Krycke on Mar 16 '07
Now you have something... The more 3D feeling is perfect... I still don't really like that it's going to be anouther Blue plz throw in that heather option on the side. Her hair looks better on that as well.
fatheed
   fatheed on Mar 16 '07
Thanks guys. I will throw in another colour option. Wotto - I can see why you asked :)
Edword
   Edword on Mar 16 '07
hahaha how did I miss this... mor geart stuff!
jpiatt
   jpiatt on Mar 16 '07
Version 7 would be PERFECT if she didn't have the bikini on. I think it cheapens the image. You don't put bikinis on blow up dolls. If you're going to do this...do it right :) Fuck the little pansy asses who can't take PLASTIC boobs on a shirt.



This idea is absolutely brilliant by the way.
The Jolly Brewer
The Jolly Brewer on Mar 16 '07
Go for 4, that's my vote.



"Welsh. And honorary English"



Huuh hummmmm, If you are Welsh, you are Welsh, I'm afraid you'll just have to deal with that particular affliction ;-)

fatheed
   fatheed on Mar 16 '07
Haha. Thanks jp. I need a little confidence boost if I'm going to sub this. But I guess because this design will divide people, I might as well pin my colours to the mast. Most people seem to like ver1, but maybe thats because of the exposed nips. Please let me know if it should be boobies in or boobies out.
Edword
   Edword on Mar 16 '07
1 for out
fatheed
   fatheed on Mar 16 '07
Thanks guys. 4 and 7 are the same - 7 shows placement.
The Jolly Brewer
The Jolly Brewer on Mar 16 '07
I say no nips, only because I think it will hamper your scoring.
tesco
   tesco on Mar 16 '07
funny
fatheed
   fatheed on Mar 16 '07
duly noted.
cassiepaige
cassiepaige on Mar 16 '07
I agree with Jolly Brewer.
jpiatt
   jpiatt on Mar 16 '07
...pussies
fatheed
   fatheed on Mar 16 '07
Ha ha. I'm going to set up a fun poll in a new blog. I promise FUN.
Sunshine69
Sunshine69 on Mar 16 '07
can her bikini bottom be a little more skimpy? I'd also prefer it if the woman was blonde. This is fantastic, though. Love it.
Sunshine69
Sunshine69 on Mar 16 '07
one more little tiny criticism... the shadows look a little funny. I'd rather they be lighter and a little larger and more like the thing they are shadowing.
Edword
   Edword on Mar 16 '07
I had an idea, maybe put a drink on the ground in front of her like she dropped it, a puddle and a little drink umbrella.
fatheed
   fatheed on Mar 16 '07
Hahaha. Thats good Ed.
emdent
emdent on Mar 16 '07
maybe a good comprimise for the boob issue is to have no bikini, and no nipples. or no bikini, and a light outline of nipples so they don't attract too much attention
itwasa_trick
itwasa_trick on Mar 16 '07
i like emdent's idea... no bikini, but no nipples. because i'm not feeling the bikini.
BrandonB11
BrandonB11 on Mar 16 '07
booo tastefull but still pretty sweet sub it
Krycke
Krycke on Mar 16 '07
I think a top less girl would look better but I also think that if you take the bikini top away you also need to take the bottom away for it to make sence (like in version 1). That will o/c make ppl wounder why the guy have pants on, and those you can't get rid of. My point is that it is better to keep the bikini ON. That will make the discussion about this sub go much smoother.
kingforaday
kingforaday on Mar 16 '07
sooooooawesome
fatheed
   fatheed on Mar 16 '07
Cheers dude. There's been a lot of input in this one so I can't please everyone. Some people will love it, and some will hate it, but I'm gonna put it out there next week.
icebar
icebar on Mar 16 '07
just one thing, the ripples in the water are kind of inconsistent in style. but that's a tiny thing and you definitely don't have to change it.

it looks good!
goldkiss
   goldkiss on Mar 17 '07
i like the first version
10 days later
Jimmy Kustes
Jimmy Kustes on Mar 28 '07
This one is really good, submit it!
fatheed
   fatheed on Mar 28 '07
I did! It's HERE!
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