What do you think? I\'m not sure what color tee to go with on this one. It looked alright on charcoal.

Now that I think of it, this could be an entry to the Rob & Big promo.

eh...i'm not sold on the idea yet...i can't think of any tips either, sorry...but keep going, it could work.

Well, is there anything you can tell me you definitely DON'T like about it?

Honestly it looks like you made it in 5 minutes and didn't put a lot of effort in it. Try to work harder on it because I find its a good concept. The jars should be closer together and make them look they are are a team, not distant and just staring at each other.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/13251/Caffeinated_Choice

Cleaned everything up quite a bit, and also gave the two "characters" a new pose that really brings out the team in them.

And I see someone has said "Don't Submit". Any suggestions?

BUMP

I need suggestions!

people generally dislike subs with text. may be make the image interesting enough so it doesn't need the text... something like the two jars jumping and giving each other a high five (^5)!

i dont want to be an ass but take a good look at the threadless catalouge. do you really feel this holds up?

sometimes an artist can make up for what he/she lacks in the drawing department with an awesome idea and concept.

my advice is keep trying =) (and stay away from food with faces)

i don't think you need the text if you put a bit more into the two characters so we can really tell what they are. that might take the concept to the next level. good luck man!

I would go with a better font for "teamwork" instead of a hand drawn one, or something a bit more bold since that is the main message. Also, if they are working together, I think it'd be cool if they were looking at each other unless they are defending against an attack from both sides by the bread army, haha! Maybe another layer behind the PB & J like some action lines for effect. I really like the concept though, it's simple, but effective and believe me, "Looking at the threadless catalog" there's some cheesy designs that have passed and yours clearly stomps them.

I love PB&J