its now 2:00 in the morning, i started a few hours ago, and basicaly aimed for something that i\'d be will to been seen in public wearing :P.



comments? suggestions?

thanks in advance for taking the time to look at my design, now im off to bed!

and (sorry for flooding :P) those arent really plungers

you would have to remove the sleeves and keep it with the boundaries but it's cool. Why does he have vampire teeth or is that just randomness and if 'music IS love' then why is it grayscale?? from a stereotypical point of view i always thought that both music and love were very colourful stimuli.. and maybe reduce the dj head... sorry, i'm only trying to be 'constructive'

this is cute! i reckon make the little monster-thing smaller or remove it



i like it on the white background as well =)

past tence of draw:

i've seen sleeve designs before... i could try keeping it only on the chest :P



teeth = randomness

i never thought of it that way, that gives me a good idea...



and dont worry :P constructive is good.



clairetran:

im going with smaller :P that little dude took me a while to make

thanks :D

Maybe coulored letters?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/13279/Harakiri

aw i like it :) i could do without the notes on the backround tho

What im doing for V2

-slightly smaller guy

-differently placed music notes

-colours



and ty for the comments :), they're appreciated

and a heart might not do any bad

i added some colours and changed it as suggested and did some other things :P

being vauge is fun ^_^



comments suggestions?

i now relize i should have shown it to you on blue... it looks killer awsome.



please use your imaginations for now

removing the ridiculous heart and trying the text in french

i agree for this version - it looks better on the blue =)

i like this MUCH better :D SUBMIT lol

p.s. i like the heart :/

i like it! The smiley is cute, and I like the heart

i love your character in the corner but not the ransom note style font you have. it doesn't compliment or really work with the rest of the design well

Vampire teeth on a Yahoo smiley? I agree the ransom note font doesn't match the design.

" Yahoo smiley" what what?



ive honestly never even seen it? :S

btw, a few people suggested that i just comepletly take out the text, should i?



and id like just like to point out that i made that font

and i'd just like to*

the text bothers me so no text please



I can think of plenty of examples of music pushing the opposite of love

maybe, i've had others comment on the text to, but with out it, the shirt looks very naked. any ideas?



and its not connecting love to music that has the theme of love, but love as being music, we love the music we love. :P

i like it and all but the colors remind me of easter. lol



idk

Noooo ! Keep the font how it is ! I love it and the colors. It just looks happy and playful. Make a great kids tee too. Just lose the fangs on his teeth and submit it. I love it ! $5

the text did seem akward.

and now it just looks naked, suggestions?



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oh!

the "bubbles" carry higher on white by mistake, but i think it looks interesting, you?

pretty cool....if you get a chance, check out my design http://www.threadless.com/critique/14217/Bread

I liked the text... I just didn't really like how it was colored...



I think the text was working but... whatever.



If you really don't like the text you could try writing it in another font.



Or maybe go in a different direction and put something else there if you have to. Seem to be a lot of text haters here...

" Seem to be a lot of text haters here..."



lol so true :P



i also thought the text was fine, but i unno.

Yeah... in the end you have to make the call...



either way I'll probably like it/follow it into the final judgement.



O_o

In the empty space : maybe you could have a radio station

broadcasting a band playing and the heart logo is coming out

of their speakers and on the radio waves (the same heart the

little head is saying out loud). Or you could have the band

playing on the back and 3 or 4 faces communicating the

heart logo on the front as they're listening to the broadcast.

maybe, maybe, well, im working on it :P

I don't like notes very much

The notes could have more weight and become more of a design focus, they don't stand out that much on any of the colours.

I absolutely agree about the notes, you could change the design style to match your little monster more or lose them altogether.



I'm glad the text is gone, don't worry too much about the blank space your design is strong enough to draw the eye.

hmmm, i could deffinatly work on the notes.



but about the blank space.

i hate plain white tees and when you wear a sweater, im worried thats all itll look like.

no matter what dont do text voters loath text

i personally like it but I'm a minority

and empty isn't allways bad

that may be true.

Don't feel obligated to fill the space.