I submitted this design previously in full colour, which meant that most of the shirt would have to be printed. I\'m guessing that\'s why it was declined, so I\'ve reworked it in two new versions.



In the main (central) version I\'ve removed all colour, except for in the boy and the balloon. Then on the left I have added white contours to the clouds. The version on the right is my original submission before I fitted it to the template.



The design is to be printed on Pacific Blue in three colours, whichever variant might be chosen.



Thanks for your helpful feedback!

oohh now that is nice. i think that would look great on a tee shirt.

i like the design on the left the best. you could try making the lines a lot smoother, less jagged, fix the boy's hand

Thanks! Yah, I'll probably fix his hand when I do it at full resolution. Also the lines don't look quite so jagged when it's larger, though they are still a little rough by design.