may add something in back of the words or change the font. what do you think?

zzzzzzip has too many Zs, don't you think?

what word should i do instead?

post comments! :()

how about KACHUNK!

kahbam is a rather chunky word what about kaboom? the ooomph is nice... you are right about the z thing... how about something like zzzing or buzzz...

i do think it is a cute idea however... you just need to modify your wordage a little.

remember that show kablam? it was sweet.



i don't think they should all be in a line. it just makes the shirt have a box of color

thank you! i'll change it tomorrow.

anyone think there should be more words?

wow writing a blog on this gets ppl to comment it fast lol.

i don't know that show..

but i liked the box of color!

hmm..

did you get a new program?

it looks great!

just dont make it so boxy, people will complain about that, they're bound to.

just move some words more to the left, and others more to the right- then id say you're ready to go and submit.

:)

best of luck!

no, but i found an obvious way to make it a lot less pixellated.

as you can see i did not use that method on the tee placement image haha.

thanks, Kasia :)

i shall do all that tomorrow.

I think they should be more like the live action Batman TV show with the jagedy bubbles. Bam! (dun-dun-dun-dun, Batman!)

right. thats what im going to try to do to it. soon.

thanks.

Go look at a comic book. Use a comic book style with large halftones.

yeah. will do.

this is great - just an idea, apply an effect to the words that relates to the word.

thanks, i probably will.

Version two is better, but why are the words just going straight across with all the letters the same size. It would have so much more energy if they came off the grid.

this is simply a font...not design...it's also a useless font (i.e. one that's very difficult to use, even by the best).



there are MANY comic book fonts around the net...just gotta google them...



but composition and layout also matter. and here...you haven't the materials yet to do any good.



hard words, but true. and none intended to bring you down.



start over with new fonts (or even draw them by hand).

I dont like the way you have rendered the type. go for an original handrawn style or pick a more suitable existing font.

thank you all. i don't mind any criticism, i'm with you.

in fact i would probably hate this design if i hadn't made it :)

robotic octopus, that was a lot of help thanks.



i dont have time to do any more versions at the moment, i swear.

this might be at a standstill for a while, with minor changes. sorry.