I love that button



Please let me know what (if anything) you guys think I should change



This is my first attempt at a submission

the illustration is very well done, but I might work on the outside border a little more

Hahaha i love it, submit it

It's pretty cool. Maybe play with the placement a little and show a few possibilities in your final submission, though.



Really good design, though. If you have the time, comment on my critique, too. ^__^

Thanks for the advice. Which color do you guys think looks better?

it's alright as a comic gag but i don't think it works for a shirt

Blue looks better because the yellow of the hair sticks out a bit. If you do the brown his hair should be a dark brown.

Just to make it more difficult (sorry!) I actually much prefer the brown. Very cute concept

I remember this one sandwich that... BUMP

I added some words to show why there is a consequence for this action. Let me know if you think this is better or if it's a step backwards.



Please give me some meaningful advice. Words: yes or no, Color: blue or brown, should I add a kitten for cuteness factor?



Please comment

Definitely prefer in blue, but as someone suggested before, I think the border needs work. Not sure it fits with the overall visual style f the illustration. Nice job though.

Thanks, any ideas for a different border?

I like it with the words and in the blue. I think the border isn't that bad if you just make the blue splotchies a little smaller so there isn't quite as much busy stuff there. It looks like you're being attacked by little blue fuzzies.

His sleave is a little big for his shirt and it looks like his arm is too short.

The background blue thingy is freakin awesome! Shes-a-bug don't know nuthin. I think that is the best part! you should forget about the guy and just submit the background part. And leave the pie, it makes me hungry just thinking about it!

Ooh, I like the kitten part too. It should be falling precatriously from your hand as if you had just dropped it because a delicious pie was forcefully inserted into your noggin.

I like both color layouts and putting the words on there polished it off...well done, submit...

I can see myself wearing a shirt like this! The problem i see is that his body is awkwardly shaped. It looks like his front is actually his back and his legs are twisted around. Keep working at it.



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