as you can probably see, this is the linework, and i would like some coloring suggestions! i\'m trying to decide whether to use a more muted or colorful approach here, so any suggestions would be really helpful. also, anything that you think i should change about what i have is also welcomed. when i color, i\'ll probably also not keep the linework in black, but change the stroke colors as well, so keep that in mind. i\'m just not sure what to do with it yet!

the design is supposed to wrap around the bottom of the shirt, with the father, mother, and part of the teenager on the front and the baby and the little girl and all the luggage and the kite on the string on the back.

thanks in advance for all your help!

anybody?

Cool design, maybe try some sort of water colour style to it ??

front and back I'm guessing. Neat concept. Don't think the TV needs antennae, though I might turn it out slightly so the viewer sees the side of it also. Not sure I understand the last line on the right, stretching down to the luggage from the upper right corner (of the back). Might want to add a little shading on the people's clothes, to complement the cross-hatching on their luggage. Other than that it looks good to submit as far as I'm concerned. Unless you wanted to add some colors.

i agree about the water color style.
try subtle colors to give it a little more personality.

yeah, get rid of that weird line...i don't see what it is for. some shading or hatching on the people might be good. the guy's leg is incomplete and shows through the bike...kinda weird. at least give him a foot.

critique mine, too?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/14973/S0_Where_do_we_go_now

I'm thinking some green definitely. What a cool shirt though!

if it extends that far, can you just have it connect so the family is forever pedaling around my waist. yeah and maybe they could be skeletons.