Woops, Sorry.



My internet got all glitchtastic and I was forced to delete this critique.



Anyway, here's a new version using the jolly brewer's idea. I think that this is going to be the general direction that I will be going in but I am still open to suggestions.

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A LOT of potential here. My main quip is the inconsistant perspective. The Austronaut is different from the swingset. Also, make the other swing levitate slightly, since there isn't gravity. Variate the colors a bit, since purple on black isn't really doing it for me.



Furthermore on the perspective, his head is facing over his back shoulder towards the viewer. I think you should re-draw him entirely, personally.

Hey, great idea on the levetating swing! And I will try and fix the perspective a bit.

So I made the seat levitate a little and I moved around one of the craters. I also tried to make the perspective on his head and legs a little bit better.

A bit more alteration on the perspective of the swing itself.

I will make one more revision and send that one in so I NEED COMMENTS!

I think I will be going with this one. The t shirt colors and placement is shown here. Wish me luck!

To get the perspective on the guy right, you need to either spin him round to the left, or rotate the frame to the right. Rotating the frame will be easier.



I think maybe you need to move the jetpacks a little, maybe so they are on the bottom of the seat as they look like they are burning his arse at the moment.



Other than that, I like it, it's improved a lot.

^Oh yeah, I never got to thank you for the moon idea. It really contributed to the direction of the design.

why doesn't he have a shadow? maybe you should add one, since the rest of the swings has it