Do you like it ? Do you think the design should be better with other colors? Thanks for your comments

I love the idea - but I think maybe maxing out on the 8 colors isn't really necessary. The marks around the bear are a little distracting - maybe try toning it down a little bit? This would be a good idea for a series of shirts.

Ok michelle, thanks, i'll work on it !

there's already a submitted shirt like this - it's in scoring right now...

Check out my Critique:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/12439/Whale_of_a_Tail

I didn't saw it, could you put a link, please?

An other version that I made.. it may looks better? Otherwise tell me if you think I should forget this idea ;)

i like this version better.

I like this one better but the one before has a better style to it. nice idea.

Please give me some feedback on my critique.

shapes need work