last version...

nice idea, should be refined. more situational stuff!

it's hard to see the guy

I love the idea but I'm not sure it's clear that it's a corpse outline rather than just a guy dancing. What if you used more circles? Experiment to see what works. Sometimes it's difficult to see what other people see when you came up with the idea.

perhaps some 'crime scene' tape or something of the sort would help out the situation...

i agree it's a little hard to see the guy, but i love the concept.

Good, but why not have the guy in an extreme, twisted position. Like he's died trying to get into that awkward right foot red/left hand yellow/left foot blue positon...



a mass of twisted limbs, i really like the 70's font you've used aswell

thanks...i'll work on it...i'm agree with seven hundred

ps: the title is ispired by the smith's song "death of a disco dancer"

smiths

left hand red, right hand blue, left foot yellow, right foot red...ops...

what do u think now?

i like it! very unique. but it still seems like it needs something else but i just cant put my hand or foot on it =)

I really think the idea is strong. I hope you just clean everything up and maybe a tad smaller. I think the problem is the pay off when the lights go out. There isn't enough there to stand alone. I say drop the glow in the dark personally. Nice thought though!

Caution tape? You can't really tell it's a crime scene, so maybe a hint of something to show it.

yea some caut tape would add to the effect

If the inks were printed in some fancy glossy ink, I think that it could add a nice shiny plastic effects to reflect the material from which the game is made?

cool