Hi, just finished this design and wanted comments on color scheme, etc....and especially help with what to title it!!

For titles I\'m thinking:
One For You...and One For Me!
Morning Coffee
or
Sleeping Sunflower

Which title do you like best or do you have other ideas? Thanks!

who said "needs work?" any particulars?

I personally can't see where it needs work... The textures are really amazing; they add a feeling of depth to it.

thanks blossompossum! what do you think about the title?

I'd just go ahead and sub this! I think your colors work very well together, the title is catchy, and the illustration work is lovely. Great job!

thanks

looks really great hey hey!

its cute, but Im just a little confused with whats going on at the bottom of the design.. is there a flower petal holding another sunflower leaf with a clock? and behind it, is that an underground view?

I think its great, but the bottom of it is a little confusing.

one of the sun's rays is reaching down trying to pull up or wake up the sunflower (by its leaf/arm)...and that sunflower's other leaf (hand) is trying to hit the snooze or alarm (doesn't show snooze button literally)...the coffee is hitting the ground around the sleeping sunflower...perhaps into a field of coffee...i don't know...could be dirt...open to interpretation i guess, even for me! i think on the larger version it might look less confusing...??

thats great!

I think what would have helped me see that better is if the dirt area continued further down below the coffee, because for some reason I thought the coffee area below the dirt was supposed to be the roots of the sunflower, or the underground part. still cool.. and it looks like everyone else understood it, so its probably just me.

LOVE IT! I'd sub it

yeah, Danielle, i can see what you mean! i do agree, that area is slightly confusing...but because it's all hand-drawn, scanned, pieced, colored in Photoshop, it is really difficult for me to make major alterations without major time headaches!! i do the best with it, and put it in critiques for feedback, but i know that usually i've already locked myself into a lot by this point!!! which title do you like?

thanks geekgirl06!

Id go with sleeping sunflower because it helps expain the part that confused me.. good job..

that's a really good point Danielle! what do others think about the title?

OMG, I want this I *so* bad. The texture and colors are amazing!

Amazing, one of your best yet! I like the title you got, but if you want some more alternatives:

Rise, Shine and Blossom
Sun-powered Sunflowers

woah this is very good.....nice textures

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looks great!
oh good ones, dacat. i like Rise and Shine

thanks guys! How about "Rise and Shine, Sleeping Sunflower!"

or maybe that's too long...

titles are tough, too many good ideas to choose from it always seems...

Rise and Sunshine

hmmm...:) thanks!!

Sleepy Sunflower .... rather than sleeping.. or if you do the full title..

Rise and Shine, Sleepy Sunflower!

because whenever I hear that phrase its usually, Rise and Shine, Sleepyhead!

I like that! Thanks Danielle! I'm going to sub this now...and call it "Rise and Shine, Sleepy Sunflower!

Take it down don't ever show me this ugly art again.