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JABshirts
JABshirts on Dec 27 '07
too much? too little? not enough? needs this? get rid of that?



what do you think?
Raimee
Raimee on Dec 27 '07
awesome! =]
DaveSmith
DaveSmith on Dec 27 '07
use the graffiti artist silhouette as a mask for a mash-up of graffiti text. Like you layered up a bunch of sharpie style graffiti writing in the shape of the artist.
mouse0nfire
mouse0nfire on Dec 27 '07
Looks great on white!



http://www.threadless.com/critique/12008/Snailblazer
DShawn
DShawn on Dec 27 '07
i like it yea white looks nice or maybe one of the colors in the design like red or blue. i really like it man nice
mindrunswild
mindrunswild on Dec 28 '07
i really like this graffiti thing. the guy doing the graffiti looks kinda weird, very off-balance. the graffiti blob is bigger and more colorful, so it's heavy. the guy is black and smaller, so it's light. a bit out of balance. may be if the guy is a composite color? or bigger? white shirt is the best.
ndstillie
   ndstillie on Dec 28 '07
definately need to find a way to mesh the graffiti guy in with the wall. maybe give him a stencil look with some overspray
ndstillie
   ndstillie on Dec 28 '07
also it looks from his feet that he is facing away from the wall
Chris Carney
Chris Carney on Dec 28 '07
I would like it more if the guy was removed
2 days later
aquasiastic
aquasiastic on Dec 30 '07
This is awesome! Great mix of colors. I'd agree that the graffiti guy could use a little work, but other than that, I'd wear it :)
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