I added a black shirt per a request of another crit (along with some small tweaks. ) The other small shirt\'s color is sand and the background is heather grey. It also works well with silver grey and dark grey.



Let me know your color preference (and of course feel free to post other comments too.)

I think it would look really good on a green background, like the color of the pencil. I'm not sure what you'd do, but i feel like the eye needs a little more to it.



Could you comment on my design? Thanks.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/11957/A_Twisted_World

the profile of the person should have lips.

i really like it on the grey --

i like it as it is and i dont like the other suggestions!

I got rid of the eye and cleaned up some things. The shirt colors are heather gray, sand and dark gray.

I would say give the brain more realistic textures more fitting of an actual brain, and make the silhouette of the man more akin to that of an actual man.

Nice concept, I like it. I think making the outlines a bit heavier would help.



Maybe do a bit of work on the thumb, it looks a bit too wide(specifically the nail). Perhaps clean up the silhouette a bit...



Again, very good concept.