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This got dropped early, so I'm trying again. The concept is just that it's supposed to be a flower giving another flower a bouquet of heads. (I know that's not really clear, that's why it's in the critique). Also, any suggestions for detail, placement, colors, or anything else are greatly appreciated. Thanks!
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see the sub here
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I don't really like the leaves on the plant on the left; their shape is a bit choppy. I also might make the smiles on the heads black so it's easier to tell what they are. Good luck :)
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I like the idea. I agree with that the faces in the bouquet needs to be bigger or darker to see it. Maybe a little bit more detail in the stems/leaves of the flowers.
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