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schleb
schleb on Mar 11 '07
This got dropped early, so I'm trying again. The concept is just that it's supposed to be a flower giving another flower a bouquet of heads. (I know that's not really clear, that's why it's in the critique). Also, any suggestions for detail, placement, colors, or anything else are greatly appreciated. Thanks!
schleb
schleb on Mar 11 '07
see the sub here
schleb
schleb on Mar 11 '07
bueller?
schleb
schleb on Mar 11 '07
hm.
Dandelionbreeze
Dandelionbreeze on Mar 11 '07
I don't really like the leaves on the plant on the left; their shape is a bit choppy. I also might make the smiles on the heads black so it's easier to tell what they are. Good luck :)
schleb
schleb on Mar 11 '07
okay! thanks for your suggestions :)
schleb
schleb on Mar 11 '07
anyone else?
schleb
schleb on Mar 11 '07
no votes :(
mrmajestik
mrmajestik on Mar 11 '07
I like the idea. I agree with that the faces in the bouquet needs to be bigger or darker to see it. Maybe a little bit more detail in the stems/leaves of the flowers.
schleb
schleb on Mar 11 '07
okay! thanks a lot
schleb
schleb on Mar 12 '07
i'll check this is the morn. more feedback before v2?
stardance
stardance on Mar 12 '07
The stems are too angular. Also it's annoying that you keep commenting to yourself to bump your design.
mlnewco
mlnewco on Mar 12 '07
add more detail to the leaves and stems.
schleb
schleb on Mar 12 '07
bump for stardance =)
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schleb
schleb on Mar 17 '07
anything else before v2?
masked_muffin
masked_muffin on Mar 17 '07
Cute idea, I'd like to see what you do with the suggestions.
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