anyone else?

put more clear expressions on the faces

this would be great if it were printed in time for easter!

submit as is.

sub or change face expressions?

I love it as is!

anymore?

how adorable, i love this!

should I add a text bubble above the yellow chick with "wtf!" inside?

any suggestions?

i think you should add shading to the inside of the egg with the blue, it looks weird. plus, the wings should be more wing-like, maybe?

dude im diggin this alot!!! $5 as is... what ever happend to the frog allegator?? check out my new design " a new idea " its in the critiques

maybe add some shading

hey king, just waitng for them to put it in the running... seems like for ever though. gotcha on the egg shading.

Added shading and better facial expressions, whatcha' think?

the green dudes wings are messed up, especially te one on the left, so if you fix that it will totally rock! great idea!

I was trying to put it on his hip but I guess it's hard to tell, i'll fix it, any more suggestions?

It's the left wing that needs fixing, not the one on the hip. It helped that you improved on the expression :)

oh, you mean his right wing (the one he's holding up)?

yep

gotcha, anymore suggestions before changes are made?

anymore?

yes, fix the wing then sub it soon, easter is comming soon!

will do, thanks!

Oh, should I change the title? I've been wondering about "The Easter Egg Calamity". What do you think?

dont change his wing i think its pretty easy to see where his arm is.. i wouldnt buy it but i think it would do well in scoring

I think both the blue chicks wings are out of proportion. they're too long. Otherwise cool.

I'd probably put the egg down and center like foreground for a better compostion.

I think the eggs in the back is best, the wings really don't look that long to me, but the right wing does need a bit re-doing.

I like the first one, like the eyes and the simplicity

I know, I actually liked it best to but it seems everyone has their own opinions of what it should like but I have to choose what I think fits the best in the end... this critique thingy is sometimes confusing because of it.

I think the critique can be useful if it helps move the idea along...

You have a strong idea here... colours and tweaks are personnel and you'll not please everyone

To me it looks like the wings on the green chick are longer than the yellow chick's. And I feel like the yellow chick could move a little more to the left (it almost looks like the green chick is going to hit the yellow chick). Nevertheless, great illustration. I like the shadows and the thought behind this. I'll give you a good score if you submit this (with or without my suggestions). :)

Aint' that the truth.

you might have over done it on the shading, but its still awesome!

thanks king

to me it looks like the patterned chicken is challenging the other one to a dance off or something. mybe do something else with the outstretched wing? but otherwise it's awesome and i would buy it if i had money.

Great concept. Good execution. The two parts of the egg don't seem to form one complete egg if put together. Remove shadowy feathers on left chicken.

I should have finished this in time for easter..... oh well.

I dont know how i missed this - good idea artdrops

Thanks Isaboa, do you think I should still submit it?

oh yeah - easter will still be fresh in everyones mind

ahahahahh thats funny