I changed it up... from the last version. Hope you like it - it was fun to draw all the devices in the case. Feedback... Thanks!

i'd like it bigger

feedback : sub, then sub and then crit mine

I'm thinking I could add some sound waves... ? Signal type... ya know?



Johnny - if I make it bigger the case will be almost the whole bottom of the shirt - really? I'll get it a shot!

i dont think it needs the waves, but wont hurt to try, might look good, and thanks for your comments ;D

Okay... Bigger... : ) Not bad! Thanks for the advice.

what do you know, got better! suuuub! mmm, maybe you come up with something else, well sub or sub later, but sub XD

Yeah, when does one know when ones work has past the point of good and slipped into the realm of shit? ahhhh "when to stop?"



This is actually version 10 - I started a new crit because the old small gif was not representative anymore and I didn't know how to change it.

maybe a pair of headphones attached to the cord? but not necessary.



love the crazy robotic fly and radar thingie.

great idea. That might help the layout too. THANKS!

haha i love this new idea, it's looking awesome! i don't really have any suggestions, some headphones would be cool but i think this is good either way

something about the shirt color is making the design get lost for me.

try Heather Grey

I guess I was going for the camouflage feel? However, undercover would also work in gray too... I"ll sub it with both! THANKS.



I'm working on headphones too. Check back.

i like it. sub!



http://www.threadless.com/critique/11622/Lucky_Clover

That's a good one. I'm glad you put those little dots of red on there. I'd wear it.

Added headphones. Thanks Robsoul!

Yeah looks good. Maybe a muted back ground or a story going on? Something really shadowy. I would change the color of the shirt and case slightly to give them more depth from each other.

Maybe the fly can be printed on the back of the shirt too?! It's really great...

ooh, placement idea: Make the case sit higher on the shirt and have the antenna go over the shoulder so it is like you are spying on the people behind you. I like the head phones you added, nice touch.

damn, id say submit but this seems to keep getting better

Can you print over the shoulder? That would be cool.

i think this is too detailed for a beltprint, not sure but i say it is fine as it is, no need to compromise your design because of that, ooo and take a look at my new project, still needs a lot of work and im open to suggestions



robot rights

oh and i think when you submit it you should change the name, is unnecessarily long, something like "fly spy kit" would do the job

technically they could print the front design and then print the back part of the shoulder with separate screens.

I like the idea of the fly on the back... do front and back designs ever get printed on threadless?

Possible front and back... the fly is OUT of the case... oh no!

uhm. you're awesome!

GREAT Suggestions... THANKS.



Bigger Size on Flickr to show detail.

oops! Somehow the sound waves got lost in the last few versions? - I've added them back.

I like the sound waves. The only thing bugging me is your presentation is a bit bland. You want me to photoshop it onto a model shot for you?

wow this is perfect! i love the color and i really love the placement of all the elements. this turned out great, i say submit

Wow, bortwein... thanks! I'll get a presentation ready for the sub. I was really focused on the design... now I'll work on putting it on a model. Suggestions are welcome. THANKS again.

This one might hide part of the design but you could still include the flat shirts smaller in the corner:





Presentation is tough, you want to show the design as big as possible but you don't want to be too cluttered but also don't want to look too boring.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2235/1798196304_1c6ea87343.jpg

Oh well it's not showing.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/idansimpson/1798196304/in/set-72157602229682871/

I know it's not iDan... ; ) But here it is with models.

5$ - I still think a heather grey version of this would be great (with the shirt showing through the case like you have the green).

It's nice in gray too. I'm not sure how to show it in both colors and have space for the detail? uhm?

just make a log with the alternative color options if you feel like sharing them. Concentrate on the main green one for the big show.

log = blog

Hey, I have another one in critique... it needs some evaluation too.

If anyone could check it out - I would appreciate it. THANKS!

Circus Freak Critique

Great idea. Your my mentor... really thanks for all the help. it's hard working alone, this helps a lot. !

:)

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