Ok, this picture is not finished as you may be able to tell by the part of the monster thats darker on the right of the shirt. But I want to put it up to see what everyone thinks of the style and whether its worth finishing or not. The placement, size on the shirt, and color of the shirt are not final. I would also want to color the finalized version so any suggestions on color choices would be good also. So with all that out of the way, comments and crits are greatly welcome. Thanks!

i dont really know what to say to critique it but definitely keep going. Looks like a fun shirt thats bound to stand out.

so, finish it already!

Here is the finally updated version. Any placement or color suggestions would be excellent. Thanks.

totally awesome. I love all the detail on this!!

Oh, and placement is cool at the bottom, I'm not so much a fan of light colored tees but I guess cream would be nice here.

This is just a full view as well as an idea for color.

It doesn't look that dark though.

I'd love the b&w one as a huge ass belt print.

Yeah, that would be pretty badass as a belt print. Too bad you wouldn't be able to get the subtle colouring in that way, I love the coloured version. I really like your style and characters, penarow.
I can't see anything o change, but if you do decide to make it into a belt print, I hope you can make the two end bits join up like the rest of the design, or else it would just look copy-pasted (that's if you're making this into a pattern).

http://www.threadless.com/critique/24881/Strength_among_others

Love the B/W sketch .... maybe use some luminous ink.

please score and comment on mine :
http://www.threadless.com/critique/24884/Fashion_Victim#v3

Thanks for the comments guys. This version and the previous are some color ideas, of which I like the green one the most. So, comment, crit, and/or give me an idea of new colors. Thanks in advance.

This here is the latest color choice. Feel free to crit or suggest your own color. Thanks.

Like me! veery cool creatures and technique.

Hey, I really appreciate the drawing of this, the only thing I would recommend is to make the top a little less linear. You can kind of tell that it was drawn on paper, and it looks like it's contained inside of a rectangle. Having a flat bottom is fine because it's going on the bottom of the shirt, but the top being flat too makes it look almost a little squished. But sick drawing dude.

Take a look at mine if you'd like.

Haha, actually this wasn't drawn on paper. But I see what you're saying. Thanks.

Dude! how long took you to draw this?

This one has been in the works for just about a year now. I couldn't nail down the style I wanted to use. This "final" version though took nine hours or so.

i like the purple one :) this has the same placement from the previous version, right?

Yep, unless you have a better placement idea, which is totally welcome.

dude submit already

awesome illustration! if I had to pick I would choose the yellow, but they're both good. normally the rectangular shape would bug me but I think it really works with the bottom placement. sub it!

This is really cool, I like the purple and green in v3 and the purple in v6.

go fo it its hot!!!
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very awesome drawing! but not sure i would want to wear it in all honesty