just a drawing i made. i scanned it in and made this. lemme know if its a bust or a good idea. and if u liek it help me make it better. please comment

Nice, where would it go on the shirt?

I like it, but I don't really know what to say to make it better. . . it's pretty good I think.

not sure yet. its cut off at the top so maybe instead of drawing it back ill put that on the collar seam so it cuts off when it gets to the collar. i glad u like it.

I like that idea.

Yeah, it looks pretty sick. Nice and simple.

You do seem to have a bit of compression/pixel issues on theh upper left corner(the colors look odd and it looks a tad pixely)



Other than that, Id buy it.

yea sometimes when i try to use the color pick on a line i get a lighter or darker shade so it is different. i usually dont notice till later. i have to fizx some messed up lines i noticed too. new version coming thanks guys.

i am working on putting up the placement so hang in there

any comments? im still trying to get the placement to work.

try a bit different color scheme maybe??

I do like it, but .. and I hate to say it... maybe it'd look better if the lines were a little cleaner. That'd possibly mean re-drawing it in Illustrator or something. That'd probably be too much hassle, though. Nice design :)

yea the blue lines are tough to draw but i cud try to fix them. and yea im bored of the color scheme a little too

should i use a thiker line for the blue ones?



and if u want the color changed, do u have any colors in mind?

smoothen it

easier said then done. any advice?

I think it's cool, i like the way you drew the lines . Maybe it should be better with various shades of orange on the arrow, with a red background.

i dont know about red but im thinking of changing the orange to shades of green or something or maybe red idk

ive made a few new versions in gunna put em up soon

Wow this is cool

thanks man im wating to submit new versions but my computer that has photoshop has messed up internet

This is pretty cool, but I think the lines need smoothing out.

The orange arrows are overpowering the outlined ones - need more balance. Agreed - import the bitmap file into Illustrator or Flash and trace with cleaner lines.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/11800/Interactivity

i only have photo shop. actually i might have illistrator. ill try this weekend.

needs some cleanup

Agreed with Physh.

I also think the blue arrows could be a different colour.

yea i know what color? i kinda just wante them outlined but now im nto sure

i chnged some things. probably a lot more line smoothining

whoops double post

Shirt placement would be nice. And is it supposed to be cut off at the top like that?





(I'm looking for some help/critique on one of my subs too...

http://www.threadless.com/critique/11894/Dangers_in_the_Field

I'd appreciate your opinion. :) If you have the time.)

its cut off at the top because if it went on it would be on the collar. it got cut off on accidnt so thats what im gunna do. im really trying to post new versions but my computer is being really crappy

i think dont cut it off like that.. centre it in the middle of the chest. its a nice design but i think add another colour or put it on a different colour tee. this doesnt scream wow buy me!

it's cut off.

thanks i can see that its cut off lol. yea i dont know what colors any ideas?

any ideas???

cmon guys

You should probably post another version that's not cut off, and has shirt placement.

yea i will soon i think i have a faded worn version and im gunna do new colors and shirt placement

sound good?



any color ideas?

any?